Monday, January 31, 2011

poems !

feel pain
it helps
clear your head
from all the bad thoughts that
consume you
from all the thoughts
that make you
change
into someone your not
hold pain
and you'll forget
all the good
and remain
silent
get hurt by someone
different
that someone
that you love
that makes you change your ways
and forever
know the truth

Sunday, January 23, 2011

poetry !

a day without you
is a day without meaning ,
im lost
im confused
i have no idea what to do
but when i see your smile
my day get lightened
and its as if
the world
is a completely pure place

Wednesday, January 12, 2011

poetry annotation

Acts of Love

by Pam Rehm
Pam Rehm
If endear is earned
and is meant to identify   
two halves

then it composes   
one meaning

which means   
a token

a knot   
a note

a noting in the head   
of how it feels

to have your heart   
be the dear one
 
  I chose this poem because it's saying that love is more complex then everyone thinks , this poem is a way of saying that love isn't just a toy or something to play with i mean does anyone really know what loves true definition is ? . I'm pretty sure no one knows but we all have a definition of love but none are the same . I think this poem shows that love is meant to be taken seriously and its not a token . within this poem I believe its trying to say that love is rich and meant to be cherished and its not  something to give without thinking about it first , if you give love then you have to be assure of it and not just love because it makes you a better person inside . I believe that love has a dark side and if you give love away then it's kinda pointless . I could relate this poem to the song last Christmas by wham  because it has a similar meaning .In this song hes saying that he gave love and that person didn't want love and in this poem hes saying that it takes two too love and that love isn't love if that person doesn't love you.

Tuesday, November 9, 2010

my life observation 1

As i was walking home today i thought to myself wow this world is chaotic.On a daily basis i walk home from school as a normal 13 year old boy but today today was a day like no other . Kids were obnoxious and acted as if someone had gave them 1000 bucks I felt as if they were somehow offending me so i decided to walk to the other side of the street . I saw these 5 kids terrorizing this lady "HELP HELP ! " the lady screamed in terror i felt like being the hero of this event but then again i rather not risk getting jumped 1 of the boys took the lady's wallet and the others took her purse . I ran to the nearest store and i really got lucky because there happened to be a female officer inside . " Excuse me but 5 kids ran up to this lady and took her wallet and purse they are 2 blocks away making a run for it " the lady looked confused and flew out the store . The officer found the boys and put them in her police car and the lady got her wallet and purse back " thank you young sir " " your welcome " the lady was astonished and put her hand out " here take this 5 dollars you deserve it " " i insist " i gave the lady back her money and then walked away as a hero . i knew i did the right thing i walked away victorious .

Wednesday, October 27, 2010

teen angst ? Naaah . . .

       I am currently reading a book called Teen Angst ? Naaah ... by Ned Vizzini its about a a boy named Ned vizzini that goes to Stuyvesant high school and faces many problems like rock bands , friends , fame , camp ,sex and lots of other issues. I can relate to this book because the main character loves his family and he would take a bullet for his family and he always gets along with everyone .

      In teen angst nahhh Ned vizzini does very risky things that if he had done in the real world he would be in big trouble. I think Ned Vizzini is a very inspiring author because he could relate to pretty much everyone and he could get someones attention by one line in his books . in Teen Angst naaah Ned vizzini is encountered by a person that just gets on his nerves i could relate to that because i have an older sister that sometimes i just cant stand because she always try's to be better then me in everything .
        in the book the main character Ned Vizzini goes through a relationship that changes his life forever he then realizes that life's not always about satisfying people its about satisfying yourself.

         This book has a social issue/justice/action because it tells kids to be aware of the planet and take care of yourself before you take care of others.
    

Wednesday, October 6, 2010

blog # 3

i think that Stuart little is a very meaningful book because it has many hidden/deeper message it tells you yo never forget your family because when you need them there always there for you

blog # 2

I am currently reading a book called happy face it's about a boy named happy face that goes through many problems with women and he clames that he is hopeless